Dead End — Story, Setting & Ideas

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Stone, David [Illustrator], Macfarlane, Wallace, 1918-1999 Project Gutenberg 2016 Not confirmed
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In a 2512 world where synthetic replacements have erased death and discomfort, two scientists confront the hollow cost of convenience. Macfarlane's story uses clinical eating rituals and pseudo-life dialogues to question whether sparing feelings ultimately annihilates genuine human experience.
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Norcross was worried.

His fears were well founded. The young man wheeled on Scientist Norcross the minute he stepped through the hedge into the force field under the giant live oak tree.

"Where are they?" he demanded. "I am coming to believe, Scientist, that your reputation is exceeded only by your inability to live up to it. The problem is only an extension of your own early work. You volunteered cooperation, and I accepted it gladly, but your delays are very distressing!"

"Johnny," said Scientist Norcross, "the press of my own experiments--"

"Then tell me you won't do it!"

"I want to help you. Don't you remember the years we spent together in your training to the high calling of scientist? I took your young hand, Johnny, and helped you over the juvenile stumbling blocks. Why, your first mind machine was one I gave you, and when--"

"You're a fraud, Scientist!" said the young man bitterly.

"The young never appreciate the old," sighed Norcross.

Norcross was shocked. "There's no call for being obscene, John Davis Drumstetter," he said sternly. "To mention eating to another person, and right in public, where you might be overheard--"

"Eat a slippery, sloppery mango on _television_, you old fool! Smear it all over your face while you ingest it into your unspeakable digestive tract!"

"John Davis Drumstetter," said the scientist with great control, "I have been your friend since you were born. Your father and I became scientists on the same day. You are young and over-eager. Just remember," he finished with a warning shake of his finger, "Satellite Station One wasn't built in a day!"

Drumstetter stopped his furious pacing and subdued his rage with visible effort. He chilled, like red steel hardening, and when he spoke he was in full command of himself.

"Now listen to me, Norcross, and keep your mouth shut. For the past forty years I've been working on the stellar overdrive. We have the Solar System in our reticule, colonies have been established on every planet, and ships have been sent to Alpha Centauri, with every chance that mankind has established itself in that solar system. But in the four hundred years since science emerged from the dark ages, we've managed to creep only four light years away from home! And you, Scientist, are withholding your work on the overdrive relay. Do you understand why your plea of old friendship does not affect me? In the past two years, you've done nothing--"

"Experiments that must be kept secret," mumbled Norcross.

"And it is my belief," said the young man in a clipped, cold voice, "that you have sold yourself to your taste buds and digestive tract. Either that," and here his burning rage came into the open, "or you are a pseudo-life!"

At this ultimate insult, Scientist Norcross was silent with indignation. He watched Drumstetter shrug into a stole, turn down the power to the huge mind machine, sling his reticule over his shoulder, and stalk off through the hedge.

Norcross slumped into a chair, his mind in confusion. He heard Drumstetter's plane as it left the ground. Plane, he thought, his mind avoiding the problem. Plane. What a curious name, handed down through the ages, to call a swift skip powered by Earth's magnetism. An original plane fought the air, buoyed up by the lift of plane surfaces in movement. When the movement stopped, it died.

Died. Death. Pseudo-life.

Scientist Norcross shuddered. His well-trained sense of humor did not include abominations.

He took the communication from his pocket and cleared to Prime Center. When the prim, grim face of Prime Center himself in the little disc was sharp, Norcross reported what had happened, even to the suggestion Drumstetter had made that he was pseudo-life.

"This is very bad," said Prime Center. "Monica Drake Lane is now pseudo-life, too."

"Took her skip into a cliff in the Sierra Mountains yesterday. Disconnected the anti-collision. A clear case."

"What will this do to Drumstetter?"

"Nothing," said Prime Center, "unless he learns."

"I'm sending her to you right now for indoctrination. Reports are that Drumstetter is visiting scientists on the West Coast, and Probability reports that he may cover the world before he returns. Do you understand? Her indoctrination must be perfect."

"It always has been." Norcross pulled his lip. "The same limitation will be in Monica Drake Lane?" he asked hopelessly.

"Of course," said Prime Center. "We'll keep you posted on developments."

"You'd better try women," said Norcross.

"Women, narcotics, or anything else! I'd eat a blueberry pie with my hands behind my back at high noon," said Prime Center with fierce obscenity, "if I thought it would do any good!"

He cut the connection.

The story opens not with a crisis but with a meal: Scientist William Manning Norcross eats steak with his fingers, smears beet juice on his nose, and triggers a molecular cleanup that leaves him immaculate. This ritual, performed before a mirror, establishes a world where bodily functions are both indulged and instantly erased—a pattern that recurs throughout the tale. Macfarlane’s prose dwells on the sensory details of consumption and cleansing, using them to signal a society that has perfected comfort at the cost of authenticity.

The television advertisements for “Weejees,” with their formation-swimming models and global slogans, saturate the environment with manufactured desire. Norcross’s chuckle at a fat man’s “Is That Right?” placard hints at a humor that is both complicit and detached. The author’s choice to begin with such mundane, vivid routines primes the reader to measure every subsequent revelation against this baseline of engineered ease.

Eating as Performance and Erasure

Macfarlane repeatedly stages eating as a public, almost theatrical act. Norcross “gnawed the bone of his steak” and “ate the baked potato with his fingers,” then studies his own messy reflection before pressing “Clear.” Later, John Davis Drumstetter breakfasts “in full public view under a tree,” licking his fingers and taunting Prime Center with descriptions of “a coddled egg, soft and white and runny.” These scenes are not mere color; they dramatize a central tension. The molecular cleanup booth erases all trace of the meal, just as the society erases discomfort, grief, and death. The author uses the physicality of eating—grease, gravy, beet juice—to insist on the messiness that the technology denies. Drumstetter’s deliberate, vulgar enjoyment becomes an act of defiance against a world that prefers sanitized pseudo-life.

The Dialogue of the Dead

The story’s most striking structural choice is the extended monologue in which Drumstetter addresses Monica Drake Lane as “pseudo-life” and refuses to let her speak. He recites a history of decline: “They froze food and precooked it and said it was even better than garden fresh vegetables. ‘Do it the easy way,’ they said.” The repetition of “pseudo-life” as an epithet transforms the word from a technical term into a curse. Macfarlane gives Drumstetter a rant that is both a diagnosis and a performance of his own despair. The interruptions—“But, Johnny—” and “But, Johnny darling—” are overridden, emphasizing that in this world, genuine human response has been replaced by programmed reassurance. The dialogue is not an exchange but a verdict delivered to an audience that cannot answer.

The Scientist as Anachronism

Both Norcross and Drumstetter are scientists, yet they occupy opposite poles of the story’s moral landscape. Norcross, in the opening, is a contented consumer of the system: he watches ads, uses the cleanup booth, and reflects smugly on how a “21st Century man” would panic at the molecular disrobing. Drumstetter, by contrast, has seen through the facade. He forces Prime Center to admit he is “the last human being on Earth” and “in the Solar System.” The author uses the scientific mind not as a symbol of progress but as a lens for critique. Norcross’s “well-trained sense of humor” and Drumstetter’s “wicked light” in his eyes both derive from the same analytical detachment, yet one leads to complicity, the other to nihilistic clarity. The story does not resolve this split; it lets both attitudes stand as possible responses to a world built on evasion.

The Architecture of Avoidance

Macfarlane builds his future through a series of substitutions: television replaces reading, precooked food replaces fresh, pseudo-life replaces the dead. The narrator’s voice remains flat and reportorial, even when describing the grotesque—the fat old man with a sign on his behind, the “monstrous letters” sweeping around the globe. This tonal consistency mirrors the society’s own refusal to register horror. The molecular cleanup booth is the emblematic device: it disintegrates “abominations such as the fur of animals” and leaves the user “sterilely clean.” The word “sterilely” carries a double meaning, hinting at both hygiene and barrenness. By the time Drumstetter declares “the blind will lead the blind,” the reader recognizes that the story’s setting is not a utopia but a meticulously maintained delusion, where every convenience has been purchased with the currency of truth.

Macfarlane’s story resists easy moralizing. It does not show a rebellion or a restoration of genuine feeling; instead, it ends with Drumstetter laughing and rubbing his nose, alone on a stage of worlds. Readers attentive to the author’s use of repetition—the word “pseudo-life” chanted like a litany, the recurring image of licked fingers—will find a work that earns its bleakness through accumulation rather than argument. The editorial note is best approached as a puzzle of tone: the narrator’s detachment mirrors the very condition the story condemns, leaving the reader to decide whether that mirror is a warning or a trap.

There’s something haunting about Macfarlane’s clinical dinners—how we trade pain for silence. It makes me think of that other world in Tea Tray in the Sky — Story, Setting & Ideas, where the sky itself feels like a held breath. Both left me sitting with the book closed, just staring at the wall, missing the ache I didn’t know I had.

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