Lord Tedric — Edition Insights
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Tedric did not know what to say in answer to that passionate outburst, so he changed the subject; effectively, if not deftly. "In speaking of the Marches to your father the king, you mentioned the Sages. What said they?"
"At another time, perhaps." Lady Rhoann was fast recovering her wonted cool poise. "'Tis far too long to go into while I stand here half naked, filthy, and stinking. Let us on with the business in hand; which, for me, is a hot bath and clean clothing."
Rhoann strolled away as unconcernedly as though she were wearing full court regalia, and Tedric turned to the king.
"Thinkst the Lady Trycie is nearby, sire?"
"If I know the jade at all, she is," Phagon snorted. "And not only near. She's seen everything and heard everything; knows more about everything than either of us, or both of us together. Why? Thinkst she'd make a good priestess?"
"The best. Much more so, methinks, than the Lady Rhoann. Younger. More ... umm ... more priestess-like, say?"
"Perhaps." Phagon was very evidently skeptical, but looked around the temple, anyway. "Trycie!" he yelled.
"Yes, father?" a soft voice answered--right behind them!
The king's second daughter was very like his first in size and shape, but her eyes were a cerulean blue and her hair, as long and as thick as Rhoann's own, had the color of ripe wheat.
"Aye, daughter. Wouldst like to be Priestess of Llosir?"
"Oh, yes!" she squealed; but sobered quickly. "On second thought ... perhaps not ... no. If sobeit sacrifice is done I intend to marry, some day, and have six or eight children. But ... perhaps ... could I take it now, and resign later, think you?"
"'Twould not be necessary, sire and Lady Trycie," Tedric put in, while Phagon was still thinking the matter over. "Llosir is not at all like Sarpedion. Llosir wants abundance and fertility and happiness, not poverty and sterility and misery. Llosir's priestess marries as she pleases and has as many children as she wants."
"Your priestess I, then, sirs! I go to have cloth-of-gold robes made at once!" The last words came floating back over her shoulder as Trycie raced away.
"Lord Tedric, sir." Unobserved, Sciro had been waiting for a chance to speak to his superior officer.
"'Tis the men ... the cleaning ... They ... We, I mean ..." Sciro of Old Lomarr would not pass the buck. "The bodies--the priests, you know, and so on--were easy enough; and we did manage to handle most of the pieces of the god. But the ... the heart, and so on, you know ... we know not where you want them taken ... and besides, we fear ... wilt stand by and ward, Lord Tedric, while I pick them up?"
"'Tis my business, Captain Sciro; mine alone. I crave pardon for not attending to it sooner. Hast a bag?"
"Yea." The highly relieved officer held out a duffle-bag of fine, soft leather.
Tedric took it, strode across to the place where Sarpedion's image had stood, and--not without a few qualms of his own, now that the frenzy of battle had evaporated--picked up Sarpedion's heart, liver, and brain and deposited them, neither too carefully nor too carelessly, in the sack. Then, swinging the burden up over his shoulder--
"I go to fetch the others," he explained to his king. "Then we hold sacrifice to end all human sacrifice."
"Hold, Tedric!" Phagon ordered. "One thing--or two or three, methinks. 'Tis not seemly to conduct a thing so; lacking order and organization and plan. Where dost propose to hold such an affair? Not in your ironworks, surely?"
"Certainly not, sire." Tedric halted, almost in midstride. He hadn't got around yet to thinking about the operation as a whole, but he began to do so then. "And certainly not on this temple or Sarpedion's own. Lord Llosir is clean: all our temples are foul in every stone and timber...." He paused. Then, suddenly: "I have it, sire--the amphitheater!"
"The amphitheater? 'Tis well. 'Tis of little enough use, and a shrine will not interfere with what little use it has."
"Wilt give orders to build...?"
"The Lord of the Marches issues his own orders. Hola, Schillan, to me!" the monarch shouted, and the Chamberlain of the Realm came on the run. "Lord Tedric speaks with my voice."
"I hear, sire. Lord Tedric, I listen."
"Have built, at speed, midway along the front of the amphitheater, on the very edge of the cliff, a table of clean, new-quarried stone; ten feet square and three feet high. On it mount Lord Llosir so firmly that he will stand upright forever against whatever may come of wind or storm."
The story opens with a striking premise: a naked woman in public becomes the pivotal event that can avert civilization's destruction. Skandos One, a time traveler from a doomed future, uses a chronoviagraph to identify Tedric, a Lomarrian blacksmith, as the key figure to reshape history. Smith immediately establishes a dual perspective—the detached, analytical view of the time traveler and the visceral, honor-bound world of Tedric. The prose alternates between technical explanations of time tracks and the gritty details of forging super-steel, creating a tension between scientific control and chaotic human action.
Time Tracks and Narrative Forking
The novella's structure hinges on the concept of forking time tracks. Skandos One observes that his intervention creates a new timeline, Time Track Two, while the original may cease to exist. This is not merely a plot device but a narrative mechanism that allows Smith to juxtapose two versions of events. The excerpts show Skandos One watching a tri-di of Tedric's life that is "so like, and yet so wildly unlike" the one he knows. The reader is constantly aware that the story being told is a deliberate alteration, not a fixed destiny. This self-reflexive quality is reinforced by the characters' own uncertainty: Skandos Two and Furmin Two struggle to understand how Tedric acquired super-steel, attributing it to divine revelation. Smith uses this ambiguity to keep the reader questioning what is real and what is manufactured.
Voice and Register Shifts
The language of Lord Tedric shifts markedly between the time travelers' modern, colloquial speech and the archaic, formal dialogue of the medieval characters. Skandos One speaks in a matter-of-fact, almost clinical tone: "Time, then, did fork." In contrast, King Phagon uses constructions like "Knowst the Upper Midvale" and "'Twas no raid, but the first skirmish of a war." This register shift is not merely decorative; it underscores the cultural and temporal distance between the two worlds. The time travelers' dialogue is peppered with exclamations like "Poppycock!" and snide remarks, while the medieval characters employ a more ritualistic, honor-laden speech. Smith also varies pace through sentence length: the battle scenes are composed of short, staccato clauses ("He swung and swung and swung again; again and again"), while the time-travel explanations use longer, more complex sentences.
Pacing Through Action and Exposition
The novella's pacing is driven by alternating bursts of action and exposition. Early sections are dominated by the time travelers' analytical discussions, with the chronoviagraph providing a detached view of events. The pace quickens dramatically when the narrative shifts to Tedric's world, particularly during the battle sequence. Here, Smith employs rapid, sensory details: the charge of armored knights, the clang of weapons, the death of Phagon's horse. The description of Phagon fighting afoot with a war-axe chained to his belt is rendered in a series of swift, brutal images. The pace slows again when the time travelers reappear, offering commentary. This alternation creates a rhythm that mirrors the story's central tension: the cold, calculated manipulation of time versus the raw, unpredictable violence of the past. The excerpts suggest that Smith uses these shifts to keep the reader engaged while also exploring the philosophical implications of his premise.
Readers should pay attention to how Smith handles the limitations of his time-travel logic. The characters themselves admit they "simply don't know enough about time," and the narrative leaves gaps—such as how Tedric stumbled upon the super-steel formula—unexplained. These gaps are not flaws but deliberate invitations to consider the story's central question: can a single altered event truly change the course of history? The novella rewards close attention to its structural choices, particularly the way it withholds information from both characters and readers.
That rainy afternoon, Lord Tedric left me wondering how quietly one wrong deed reshapes a world. I set it down, thinking of Skandos One watching his own interference ripple outward, and my gaze drifted to another shelf. There, Ask a Foolish Question — Context and Discussion waited, and I found the same patient dread—asking, always asking, what remains when history tilts.
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