Uniform of a Man — Text and Context

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Authors: Palais, Rudolph [Illustrator], Dryfoos, Dave, 1915-2003 Digital Source: Project Gutenberg Gutenberg Release Year: 2010 First Publication Year: Not confirmed

Key Word: Science fiction; Short stories; Prisoners -- Fiction; Human-alien encounters -- Fiction Target Reader: Readers of public-domain and historical texts

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In Dave Dryfoos's 1954 science fiction story, a prisoner's thirst for revenge against the Agvars is tested when rescue brings a chance to impersonate himself. The narrative shifts between Chet Barfield's degraded captivity and his calculated silence about a deadly secret, exploring how uniform—both literal and figurative—defines humanity.

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Remembrance was itself a change brought by the roaring ship; usually he moped in a vegetative daze. But now he recalled how he'd looked in the tight white uniform: six feet of well-fed muscle accentuated by the garment's lines, the blue stars on each lapel just matching his eyes, the peak of his cap harmonizing with the straight line of his jaw.

He remembered how he'd sounded, speaking words of nonchalant and unfelt modesty in the soft Southern voice the girls had liked so well. He could have had his pick of girls. He'd been a picked man himself.

Highly selected--that was the phrase. He was highly selected, Chet reminded himself, shrinking as the children came closer and their missiles began to really hurt.

He'd been highly selected since his eighteenth year. At 25 he'd had seven years of pre-flight training--seven years of indoctrination specifically designed to give him self-confidence enough to face the void itself without flinching.

Now he flinched from children.... Still, the schooling had worked, he acknowledged--so well that when their ship crashed into this planet Hedlot's salty sea, his first reaction had been indignation at the elements.

His second thought had been for his comrades. But they went down with the ship; he alone had been hurled clear. Learning that, he'd swum resolutely in the direction he knew the shore to be, and made it.

Exhausted, all right--shocked, naked, half-dead really. But quite ready to point out his rank and identity to the first passer-by.

Lucky for him, Chet mused, that he'd had no chance to express his callow arrogance. Shock saved his life--sank him into a stupor, so when the Agvars found him, he was helpless. He knew it was only because it had seemed perfectly safe that they'd tied him up and brought him to the village, instead of killing him then and there.

By the time he'd recovered somewhat from the initial shock and exhaustion, they were used to him, convinced he was harmless if well chained-up. And they played it safe by giving him nothing but a little water--no clothing, no shelter, no food....

They let him live, amused by the thirst that drove him to lap up each morning's drenching dew, fascinated by his ravenous appetite for the garbage they flung at him.

The Agvars--furry, savage half-men, with something of the dog and something of the ape and little of the man about them--the Agvars let him live, Chet realized, for exactly one reason: he made them feel superior.

They'd learn now! Even though the children had stopped shrieking and gone away, disgusted at his passivity, no villager's insensitive ears could yet hear the ship.

In their boastfulness, the Agvars had invited other tribes to come and look at him and poke at him and laugh at him. His presence was known over the whole planet. He'd be found, no matter where on Hedlot the spaceship landed.

And then would come the showdown!

But the showdown came earlier than he expected, speeded because the ship landed close by. Chet told himself he should have counted on that kind of accuracy, but he'd underestimated his fellow pilots.

He had himself signalled Earthside, just before the crash, that his ship was about to land. He'd given his position--described sea and shoreline. They'd find him, if he stayed chained to the post.

But he didn't. Taken unaware by the Agvars who loosed him, Chet was docile, happy even--certain they wouldn't hurt him now, but would try to minimize their former cruelty as they turned him over to the spacemen.

When they put new chains on him, around neck and waist, he thought it was only to make sure he didn't run away before they could deliver him ostentatiously to the ship.

A dozen adult males had gathered in the clearing, but that was hardly an unusual event. Even when they all started out, on a winding trail that didn't head in the direction of the ship's recent landing-sounds, Chet was convinced they were just circling some geographic obstacle.

He was interested in the forest of 20-foot mosses and 50-foot evergreen hardwoods pressing densely on each side of the trail. Unconscious when they'd carried him from the beach, he'd never been out of the village since, had never inspected these woods. And he thought his mates from Earth would want to know about them.

Chet could easily have outdistanced the clumsy Agvars if not forced to imitate their crouching walk. But he knew from experience that to show off his erect stance and 18-inch height advantage would make them find some unpleasant way to put him in his place.

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From its first paragraph, "Uniform of a Man" establishes a protagonist defined by physical and psychological degradation. Chet Barfield moves with a "gorilla-like gait," chained and slouched, his back scarred by whips. The prose mirrors his condition: short, clenched sentences give way to bursts of italicized hope—"Rescue! Rescue was at hand!"—then snap back to the hard facts of starvation and habit. The story’s voice oscillates between Chet’s interior fury and a cooler, observational tone, especially when Commander Seymour and Dr. Pine enter. This tension between raw emotion and clinical detachment drives the narrative’s pace, which accelerates during action sequences and slows during Chet’s plotting.

Captivity and the Rhythm of Degradation

The opening pages immerse the reader in Chet’s sensory world: the "diffuse red sun of Hedlot," the "swish-roar-scream" of a spaceship, and the "dense hardwood chain" that yanks him back to all fours. Dryfoos uses repetitive, almost ritualistic details to convey the monotony of abuse. The village boys chant "derisively" and throw "clots of garbage" and "sharp rocks"—a cycle Chet has learned to endure by crouching "knees to chin, hands clasped around his matted hair." The prose itself becomes a kind of endurance test, lingering on the physical specifics of survival: learning to breathe the local atmosphere in a "special rhythm," eating whatever is available. This section establishes a baseline of suffering against which the later action will be measured.

The Impersonation Plan and Narrative Irony

Once rescued, Chet’s voice shifts from passive endurance to active scheming. The plan to have Dr. Pine impersonate him—"He'll pretend he's you, or someone like you"—creates a layered irony. Chet knows that Pine will be mistaken for an "escaped sacrifice" who killed a witch-doctor, yet he says nothing. The narrative voice here is tight-lipped, letting Chet’s internal calculation surface in short, bitter asides: "Tell him? Huh. Let him find out the hard way!" The pacing quickens as Chet dons fatigues and shoes, noting that clothing will change his appearance—the first hint that "uniform" carries symbolic weight. The dialogue between Chet and Commander Seymour becomes a contest of worldviews: Chet demands punishment ("Kill them, sir! That they'll understand!"), while Seymour insists on a more cautious approach. This ideological clash propels the story forward, with Chet’s silence acting as a time bomb.

Pace and the Weight of Unspoken Knowledge

As the trio enters the forest, the narrative pace slows again, weighted by Chet’s "vague reluctance." The trees "dwarfed and oppressed him," and old fears stir "at new places." Dryfoos uses the forest as a psychological barrier, cutting Chet off from the ship and from any easy alliance with his rescuers. The prose becomes more interior, tracking Chet’s calculations: "Perhaps the two men he guided would stand together against him." The reader knows what Chet knows—that Pine is walking into danger—but the story withholds the full consequences. This gap between knowledge and action creates a taut, suspenseful rhythm. The final line of the excerpt, "He couldn't be cut off much more than he was already!" underscores how the uniform of a man—whether prisoner, patient, or guide—remains a contested identity.

The Uniform as Metaphor

Throughout the excerpts, clothing and appearance signal shifts in power and identity. Chet’s initial nakedness and matted hair mark him as subhuman to the Agvars; the "fatigues and shoes—even tight ones" he receives after rescue are a step toward reclaiming humanity. Yet Dr. Pine, who will impersonate Chet, goes "naked except for a pair of slippers and a sunlamp tan," deliberately stripping off the uniform of civilization. The story plays with these visual cues: the Agvars have never seen Chet dressed or shaved, so Pine’s disguise might work—or fail catastrophically. The title "Uniform of a Man" thus points to a central question: is humanity defined by what you wear, how you walk, or what you choose to reveal? Chet’s silence about the witch-doctor is itself a kind of uniform, hiding his true intentions.

Readers should attend to how Dryfoos uses physical detail—the chain, the slippers, the forest—to externalize Chet’s internal state. The story’s brevity (under 8,200 words) means every scene carries weight; note how the pace accelerates during dialogue and slows during Chet’s solitary reflections. The ending is not included in these excerpts, but the trajectory suggests a reckoning between Chet’s desire for revenge and the moral framework of his rescuers. Pay attention to who gets to define what a "man" is—and whether the uniform can be changed.

There are stories that sit with you quietly, like an old photograph found in a drawer. That Dryfoos tale—about wearing a borrowed identity, carrying a truth you can't speak—stayed with me for weeks. It reminded me, strangely, of the solitude in The Martian — Reading Companion, where survival also becomes a kind of silence. Both left me thinking about what we hide, even from ourselves.