Progress Report — Edition Insights
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Everything had been done, checked and rechecked hours and days ago. He found himself wishing there were some little thing, some desperate little error which must be corrected hurriedly, just something to break the tension of waiting.
"You're all right, Sam, Prof?" he asked the major and professor unnecessarily.
"A little nervous," Major Eddy answered without moving.
"Of course," Professor Stein said. There was a too heavy stress on the sibilant sound, as if the last traces of accent had not yet been removed.
"I expect everyone is nervous, not just the hundreds involved in this, but everywhere," Jennings commented. And then ruefully, "Except Professor Stein there. I thought surely I'd see some nerves at this point, Prof." He was attempting to make light conversation, something to break the strain of mounting buck fever.
"If I let even one nerve tendril slack, Colonel, I would go to pieces entirely," Stein said precisely, in the way a man speaks who has learned the language from text books. "So I do not think of our ship at all. I think of mankind. I wonder if mankind is as ready as our ship. I wonder if man will do any better on the planets than he has done here."
"Well, of course," Colonel Jennings answered with sympathy in his voice, "under Hitler and all the things you went through, I don't blame you for being a little bitter. But not all mankind is like that, you know. As long as you've been in our country, Professor, you've never looked around you. You've been working on this, never lifting your head...."
He jerked in annoyance as a red light blinked over the emergency circuit, and a buzzing, sharp and repeated, broke into this moment when he felt he was actually reaching, touching Stein, as no one had before.
He dragged the phone toward him and began speaking angrily into its mouthpiece before he had brought it to his lips.
"What the hell's the matter now? They're not going to call it off again! Three times now, and...."
He broke off and frowned as the crackling voice came through the receiver, the vein on his temple pulsing in his stress.
"I beg your pardon, General," he said, much more quietly.
The two men turned from their radar scopes and watched him questioningly. He shrugged his shoulders, an indication to them of his helplessness.
"You're not going to like this, Jim," the general was saying. "But it's orders from Pentagon. Are you familiar with Senator O'Noonan?"
"Vaguely," Jennings answered.
"You'll be more familiar with him, Jim. He's been newly appointed chairman of the appropriations committee covering our work. And he's fought it bitterly from the beginning. He's tried every way he could to scrap the entire project. When we've finished this test, Jim, we'll have used up our appropriations to date. Whether we get any more depends on him."
"Yes, sir?" Jennings spoke questioningly. Political maneuvering was not his problem, that was between Pentagon and Congress.
"We must have his support, Jim," the general explained. "Pentagon hasn't been able to win him over. He's stubborn and violent in his reactions. The fact it keeps him in the headlines--well, of course that wouldn't have any bearing. So Pentagon invited him to come to the field here to watch the test, hoping that would win him over." The general hesitated, then continued.
"I've gone a step farther. I felt if he was actually at the center of control, your operation, he might be won over. If he could actually participate, press the activating key or something, if the headlines could show he was working with us, actually sent the test ship on its flight...."
"General, you can't," Jennings moaned. He forgot rank, everything.
"I've already done it, Jim," the general chose to ignore the outburst. "He's due there now. I'll look to you to handle it. He's got to be won over, Colonel. It's your project." Considering the years that he and the general had worked together, the warm accord and informality between them, the use of Jennings' title made it an order.
"Over," said the general formally.
"Out," whispered Jennings.
The two men looked at him questioningly.
"It seems," he answered their look, "we are to have an observer. Senator O'Noonan."
"Even in Germany," Professor Stein said quietly, "they knew enough to leave us alone at a critical moment."
"He can't do it, Jim," Major Eddy looked at Jennings with pleading eyes.
"Oh, but he can," Jennings answered bitterly. "Orders. And you know what orders are, don't you, Major?"
"Yes, sir," Major Eddy said stiffly.
Professor Stein smiled ruefully.
The story opens with Colonel Jennings sweating in a Nevada bunker, watching a test ship shimmer through heatwaves. The air conditioning merely “washed the hot air around him,” a small detail that establishes the oppressive atmosphere. Clifton and Apostolides build tension through physical sensation—sweat, brassy taste, hunched shoulders—rather than technical exposition. The dialogue is terse, often interrupted by action: a phone buzzes, a radar pip vanishes, a senator complains of boredom. This is a story told in gestures and half-finished sentences, where the real drama lies in what characters do not say.
Diction of Pressure and Delay
The authors use a vocabulary of waiting and interruption. Words like “monotonous,” “patiently,” “enduring,” and “fascinated gaze” slow the narrative, while the countdown—“Zero minus one half hour”—creates a ticking clock. The senator’s dialogue is deliberately jarring: “I was getting a little bored with nothing happening.” His casual arrogance contrasts with the scientists’ focused silence. The colonel’s thoughts are rendered in short, clipped phrases: “This is it. Apparently this time we’ll go through with it.” The repetition of “nothing” when the ship disappears (“And then, nothing”) echoes the emptiness of space and the failure of control.
Voice and the Hierarchy of Worry
Each character speaks in a register that reveals his role. The general uses stock phrases—“For the good of the service”—that signal institutional pressure. The professor’s “too heavy stress on the sibilant sound” hints at a foreign accent, marking him as an outsider. Major Eddy’s responses are physical: “his shoulders hunched a trifle.” The senator’s questions are “arrogant,” and he dislikes being ignored. The colonel mediates between these voices, his own speech formal even under stress (“Yes, sir”). The phone becomes a prop for power: the general rings insistently, the senator is put on hold, and the colonel drops the receiver without waiting for a reply.
Description as Emotional Barometer
The setting is rendered through sensory details that mirror the characters’ anxiety. The heat is “psychosomatic,” compounded by the view of the ship. Sweat is mentioned repeatedly—on faces, necks, hands—and its odor rises from bodies. The radar screens are “blank eyes,” the ship a “silvery spire.” When the ship vanishes, the description shifts to stunned silence: “In a daze, Jennings picked up the phone.” The return of the ship is described in musical terms: Major Eddy plays his controls “as sound pouring from a musical instrument.” These metaphors tie the technical to the human, making the machinery feel alive.
Structure of a Single, Fractured Moment
The story unfolds in real time, from the final half-hour countdown to the ship’s return. The narrative is broken by phone calls, internal monologue, and sudden shifts in focus. The disappearance of the ship is a rupture: the radar pip vanishes, and the colonel’s mind goes blank. The return is equally abrupt: “It’s back!” The structure mirrors the uncertainty of the test—no smooth arc, only a series of shocks. The excerpt ends before the ship lands, leaving the outcome unresolved. This fragmentary form emphasizes the theme of progress as a series of interruptions, not a straight line.
The Senator as Antagonist of Reason
Senator O’Noonan represents political interference. He is introduced as having an “idea of progress” that is “not particularly scientific.” He grows bored during the crisis and demands attention. The colonel must manage him with gentle reproof: “Quiet during the test, Senator.” The general fears the senator will translate the loss as “two billion dollars shot up into the air.” The senator’s presence forces the scientists to consider scapegoating—blaming one officer to preserve faith in science. This tension between political expediency and empirical truth is the story’s central conflict, more pressing than the technical failure itself.
Readers should attend to the way Clifton and Apostolides use silence and interruption. The story’s power lies not in its speculative technology but in its precise rendering of human stress under institutional pressure. The incomplete ending invites speculation, but the authors’ craft is best observed in the small choices: a dropped phone, a hunched shoulder, a senator’s boredom. These details, not the plot, carry the weight of the narrative.
That radar blip vanishing—I remember my father’s old ham radio crackling with the same static. We never talked about what we were listening for. Later, reading Probability — A Closer Reading, that hushed uncertainty came back, the way a held breath between transmissions feels like a question nobody wants answered aloud.
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